readthedocs · benjaoming · Feb 10, 2023 · Feb 8, 2023 · Feb 8, 2023 · Feb 9, 2023
diff --git a/docs/user/commercial/index.rst b/docs/user/commercial/index.rst
@@ -1,10 +1,40 @@
-Read the Docs for Business
---------------------------
+About |com_brand|
+=================
 
-Read the Docs is our community solution for open source projects at `readthedocs.org`_
-and we offer Read the Docs for Business
-for building and hosting commercial documentation at `readthedocs.com`_.
-Features in this section are specific to Read the Docs for Business.
+.. this page is currently moving towards becoming "About Read the Docs for Business"
+.. rather than an index of features.
+
+We offer |com_brand| for building and hosting commercial documentation.
+
+Our commercial solutions are provided as a set of subscriptions that are paid and managed through an online interface.
+In order to get started quickly and easily, a `trial option <https://about.readthedocs.com/pricing/>`__ is provided free of charge.
+
+.. seealso::
+
+   `Read the Docs website: Features <https://about.readthedocs.com/about/>`__
+      A high-level overview of platform features is available on our website, and the
+      `pricing page <https://about.readthedocs.com/pricing/>`__ has a feature breakdown by subscription level.
+
+   `Read the Docs website: Company <https://about.readthedocs.com/company/>`__
+      Information about the company running Read the Docs, including our mission, team, and community.
+
+
+Commercial documentation solutions
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+
+In addition to providing the same features as |org_brand|,
+commercial subscriptions to Read the Docs add additional features and run on separate infrastructure.
+
+.. figure:: /img/community_in_business.png
+   :align: center
+   :scale: 50%
+
+   Read the Docs for Community and Business are a combined system:
+   All features developed for community benefit the business solution, and most solutions developed for business users
+   are implemented for the community.
+
+The following list is a high-level overview of the areas covered by |com_brand|.
+If you want a full feature breakdown, please refer to our `pricing page <https://about.readthedocs.com/pricing/>`__.
 
 Private repositories and private documentation
     The largest difference between the community solution and our commercial offering
@@ -15,24 +45,22 @@ Private repositories and private documentation
 Additional build resources
     Do you have a complicated build process that uses large amounts
     of CPU, memory, disk, or networking resources?
-    Our commercial offering has much higher default resources
-    that result in faster documentation build times
-    and we can increase it further for very demanding projects.
+    Commercial subscriptions offer more resources
+    which results in faster documentation build times.
+    We can also customize builders, such as with a GPU or multiple CPUs.
 
 Priority support
     We have a dedicated support team that responds to support requests during business hours.
-    If you need a quick turnaround, please signup for readthedocs.com.
 
 Advertising-free
     All commercially hosted documentation is always ad-free.
 
-.. _readthedocs.org: https://readthedocs.org
-.. _readthedocs.com: https://readthedocs.com
+Business features
+    Enjoy additional functionality specifically for companies, such as
+    organization support with team management, single-sign on, and audit logging.
 
-.. toctree::
-   :caption: Additional commercial features
+    .. seealso::
 
-   organizations
-   single-sign-on
-   sharing
-   privacy-level
+       - :doc:`/commercial/organizations`
+       - :doc:`/commercial/single-sign-on`
+       - :doc:`/security-log`
diff --git a/docs/user/commercial/privacy-level.rst b/docs/user/commercial/privacy-level.rst
@@ -7,10 +7,8 @@ By default, only users that belong to your organization can see the dashboard of
 If you want users outside your organization and anonymous users to be able to see the dashboard of your project,
 and the build output of *public versions* you can set the privacy level of your project to ``Public``.
 
-- Go the :guilabel:`Admin` tab of your project.
-- Click on :guilabel:`Advanced Settings`.
-- Change to :guilabel:`Privacy level` to `Public`.
-
+You can administer this in your :term:`dashboard` by navigating to :menuselection:`Admin --> Advanced Settings`
+and changing :guilabel:`Privacy level` to `Public`.
 
 .. note::
 

diff --git a/docs/user/guides/administrators.rst b/docs/user/guides/administrators.rst
@@ -31,3 +31,4 @@ have a look at our :doc:`/tutorial/index`.
    manage-read-the-docs-teams
    automation-rules
    redirects
+   Managing your Read the Docs for Business subscription </commercial/subscriptions>
diff --git a/docs/user/img/community_in_business.png b/docs/user/img/community_in_business.png
diff --git a/docs/user/index.rst b/docs/user/index.rst
@@ -86,7 +86,6 @@ to help you create fantastic documentation for your project.
    /subprojects
    /single_version
    /science
-   /commercial/organizations
    /automatic-redirects
 
 .. toctree::
@@ -252,14 +251,6 @@ Read the Docs has a commercial offering with improved support and additional fea
   :doc:`Sharing externally <commercial/sharing>`
 
 
-.. toctree::
-   :maxdepth: 1
-   :hidden:
-   :caption: Read the Docs for Business
-   :glob:
-
-   commercial/*
-
 The Read the Docs project and organization
 ------------------------------------------
 
@@ -303,6 +294,7 @@ of Read the Docs and the larger software documentation ecosystem.
    changelog
 
    about
+   /commercial/index
    team
    open-source-philosophy
    story

diff --git a/docs/user/reference/features.rst b/docs/user/reference/features.rst
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@ Features
 
 .. toctree::
    :maxdepth: 1
+   :glob:
 
    ../features
    analytics
@@ -20,3 +21,7 @@ Features
    /user-defined-redirects
    /badges
    /security-log
+   /commercial/organizations
+   /commercial/privacy-level
+   /commercial/sharing
+   /commercial/single-sign-on