From 0496b04e88bd92f3157daf65048b48f82f2442e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andy LaMora <alamora@topcoder.com>
Date: Fri, 20 Oct 2017 14:30:02 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Update index.jsx

Includes changes to copy:
- add OperationCode
- Drop the VA
- change wording about college degrees
---
 .../communities/veterans/Home/index.jsx         | 17 ++++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/shared/components/tc-communities/communities/veterans/Home/index.jsx b/src/shared/components/tc-communities/communities/veterans/Home/index.jsx
index d3911a99f0..b2bf9e2cd9 100644
--- a/src/shared/components/tc-communities/communities/veterans/Home/index.jsx
+++ b/src/shared/components/tc-communities/communities/veterans/Home/index.jsx
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ export default function Home() {
                 </p>
                 <p>
                   Yet, there’s often a gap that exists in translating this
-                  experience to civilian employment without a college degree.
+                  experience to civilian employment.
                 </p>
                 <p>
                   A study by the nonprofit research group, Center for New
@@ -101,9 +101,10 @@ export default function Home() {
             text={
               <div styleName="bottomMargin paragraph">
                 <p>
-                  We’ve partnered with the Department of Veterans Affairs to
-                  assist in bridging the gap between real-world skills and a
-                  career in technology as well as promote this platform.
+                  We’ve partnered with OperationCode, a 503(c) advocacy group 
+                  dedicated to helping veterans learn to code, to assist in 
+                  bridging the gap between real-world skills and a career
+                  in technology as well as promote this platform.
                 </p>
                 <p>
                   Together, we’ve developed a coalition of companies that share
@@ -126,12 +127,14 @@ export default function Home() {
                   The Veterans.Topcoder program was designed to assist
                   military service members and veterans who want to pursue
                   a career in technology into viable job opportunities, which
-                  can be difficult to obtain without a college degree.
+                  can be difficult to obtain without showing direct experience
+                  with private sector toolsets.
                 </p>
                 <p>
                   Joining The Veterans.Topcoder community is free and
-                  enables you to compete on projects, earn money and
-                  continue to enhance your skills.
+                  enables you to compete on projects, earn money,
+                  enhance your skills, and apply them to common commercial
+                  solutions for paying customers.
                 </p>
                 <p>
                   It also places you in the spotlight with some of the top

From 0c128205b215488e8454bebe5661c3e0011fb326 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: ajefts <ajefts@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 20 Oct 2017 14:33:14 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update index.jsx

---
 .../tc-communities/communities/veterans/Home/index.jsx        | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/shared/components/tc-communities/communities/veterans/Home/index.jsx b/src/shared/components/tc-communities/communities/veterans/Home/index.jsx
index b2bf9e2cd9..82032de62e 100644
--- a/src/shared/components/tc-communities/communities/veterans/Home/index.jsx
+++ b/src/shared/components/tc-communities/communities/veterans/Home/index.jsx
@@ -101,8 +101,8 @@ export default function Home() {
             text={
               <div styleName="bottomMargin paragraph">
                 <p>
-                  We’ve partnered with OperationCode, a 503(c) advocacy group 
-                  dedicated to helping veterans learn to code, to assist in 
+                  We’ve partnered with OperationCode, a 503(c) advocacy group
+                  dedicated to helping veterans learn to code, to assist in
                   bridging the gap between real-world skills and a career
                   in technology as well as promote this platform.
                 </p>