Merge pull request readthedocs#5728 from rtfd/davidfischer/small-commercial-doc-rework

Small commercial hosting page rework

Author: davidfischer

docs/commercial/index.rst

@@ -1,19 +1,35 @@
 Read the Docs Commercial Features
 ---------------------------------
 
-.. note:: These features are for our new commercial offering, `readthedocs.com`_.
+Read the Docs has a community solution for open source projects on `readthedocs.org`_
+and we offer commercial documentation building and hosting on `readthedocs.com`_.
+Features in this section are specific to our commercial offering.
 
+Private repositories and private documentation
+    The largest difference between the community solution and our commercial offering
+    is the ability to connect to private repositories,
+    to restrict documentation access to certain users,
+    or to share private documentation via private hyperlinks.
 
-All of the other features outlined in these docs work on both sites.
-Things inside this section are specific to our commercial offering.
+Additional build resources
+    Do you have a complicated build process that uses large amounts
+    of CPU, memory, disk, or networking resources?
+    Our commercial offering has much higher default resources
+    that result in faster documentation build times
+    and we can increase it further for very demanding projects.
 
-The largest feature that is different is that documentation on `readthedocs.com`_ is **private**.
-If you have private code that you want documentation for,
-this is our solution.
+Priority support
+    We have a dedicated support team that responds to support requests during business hours.
+    If you need a quick turnaround, please signup for readthedocs.com.
 
+Advertising-free
+    All commercially hosted documentation is always ad-free.
+
+.. _readthedocs.org: https://readthedocs.org
 .. _readthedocs.com: https://readthedocs.com
 
 .. toctree:: 
+   :caption: Additional commercial features
 
    custom_domains
    organizations

docs/support.rst

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ This includes:
 Commercial Support
 ------------------
 
-We offer commercial support for Read the Docs, commercial hosting,
+We offer commercial support for Read the Docs, :doc:`commercial hosting </commercial/index>`,
 as well as consulting around all documentation systems.
 You can contact us at [email protected] to learn more,
 or read more at https://readthedocs.com/services/#open-source-support.