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Author: pcwalton

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-refs/heads/try: 6de570f8173fb35ad52c4e5b90bae74d282d28ad
+refs/heads/try: b0931a0a0f8ff10befa1e3037b670badca52a65f
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branches/try/src/doc/complement-design-faq.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 % The Rust Design FAQ
 
-This document describes decisions that were arrived at after lengthy discussion and
+This document describes decisions were arrived at after lengthy discussion and
 experimenting with alternatives. Please do not propose reversing them unless
 you have a new, extremely compelling argument. Note that this document
 specifically talks about the *language* and not any library or implementation.

branches/try/src/doc/guide-pointers.md

@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ let z = &x;
 Mutable ones, however, are not:
 
 ```{rust,ignore}
-let mut x = 5i;
+let x = 5i;
 let y = &mut x;
 let z = &mut x; // error: cannot borrow `x` as mutable more than once at a time
 ```

branches/try/src/doc/guide-tasks.md

@@ -89,9 +89,10 @@ closure in the new task.
 fn print_message() { println!("I am running in a different task!"); }
 spawn(print_message);
 
-// Alternatively, use a `proc` expression instead of a named function.
+// Print something profound in a different task using a `proc` expression
 // The `proc` expression evaluates to an (unnamed) owned closure.
 // That closure will call `println!(...)` when the spawned task runs.
+
 spawn(proc() println!("I am also running in a different task!") );
 ~~~~
 
@@ -351,14 +352,14 @@ fn main() {
 
 The function `pnorm` performs a simple computation on the vector (it computes the sum of its items
 at the power given as argument and takes the inverse power of this value). The Arc on the vector is
-created by the line:
+created by the line
 
 ~~~
 # use std::rand;
 # use std::sync::Arc;
 # fn main() {
 # let numbers = Vec::from_fn(1000000, |_| rand::random::<f64>());
-let numbers_arc = Arc::new(numbers);
+let numbers_arc=Arc::new(numbers);
 # }
 ~~~
 

branches/try/src/doc/guide-unsafe.md

@@ -446,7 +446,7 @@ possible in two ways: the `#[start]` attribute, or overriding the
 default shim for the C `main` function with your own.
 
 The function marked `#[start]` is passed the command line parameters
-in the same format as C:
+in the same format as a C:
 
 ```
 #![no_std]
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ standard library itself.
 # Interacting with the compiler internals
 
 > **Note**: this section is specific to the `rustc` compiler; these
-> parts of the language may never be fully specified and so details may
+> parts of the language may never be full specified and so details may
 > differ wildly between implementations (and even versions of `rustc`
 > itself).
 >