diff --git a/content/news/032/index.md b/content/news/032/index.md index cf673e066..6a44bc783 100644 --- a/content/news/032/index.md +++ b/content/news/032/index.md @@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ The source code is available on [GitHub][chaz-source]. [Warlock's Gambit][warlocks-gambit-itchio] is a puzzle game constructed like a card game, playable in the browser. You are given a static deck and have to play your cards carefully to beat your opponent. In keeping with the theme of the -jam, the decks are stacked against you, in fact, it's impossible to win by +jam, the decks are stacked against you. In fact, it's impossible to win by default. But you have a trick up your sleeve, literally. You can drag a card in your sleeve to play it later. @@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ _Screenshot of V-Racer_ V-Racer ([GitHub][vracer-github]) by [@Syn-Nine][synnine-twitter] is a retro drift racing game inspired by Atari -Battlezone and Wipeout created using +Battlezone and Wipeout, created using Syn9's [Rust Mini Game Framework][mgfw]. The game is part of an open source [repository][s9-minigame-repo] of several @@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ Latest developments: - The [mushroom biome][wor-mushroom] art was completed - All puzzles for the main game are complete - More secrets have been added -- Four out of the five [characters][wor-characters] are now in game +- Four out of the five [characters][wor-characters] are now in the game - `SDL_mixer` was replaced with a custom Rust mixer built on top of [libsoundio][wor-libsoundio] - Numerous minor bug fixes and quality of life improvements, you can find @@ -385,13 +385,13 @@ async and serde support, more flexible exporting of Rust symbols to Godot, better CI and doc integration, among many more features that have previously been exclusive to the [GitHub repo][gd-github]. -This release also makes the the API much more more user-friendly than +This release also makes the API much more user-friendly than previous versions with more consistent naming, flatter module structure and fewer redundancies. Thank you to all of the contributors who made this possible! -A full list of a the changes are available in the [changelog][gd-changelog]. +A full list of the changes is available in the [changelog][gd-changelog]. [gd-announcement]: https://godot-rust.github.io/releases/ [gd-changelog]: https://github.com/godot-rust/godot-rust/blob/master/CHANGELOG.md @@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ foundation layer or backend for your next app, game engine, or game. Version [v0.2.1] improves and adds features focusing on the creation of apps, like select mouse cursor or lazy loop among other things. The main focus was -improve the integration with [egui] supporting all its features. +to improve the integration with [egui] supporting all its features. [Notan]: https://github.com/Nazariglez/notan [v0.2.1]: https://github.com/Nazariglez/notan/releases/tag/v0.2.0 @@ -494,7 +494,7 @@ Twitter][twitter-iyesgames] for updates. by [@kettlecorn](kettlecorn_twitter) that released earlier this month. -Bloom3D is built completely with Rust from user-interface to core algorithms. +Bloom3D is built completely with Rust from the user interface to core algorithms. The game engine and many of the libraries powering Bloom3D are open-sourced on [GitHub][koi]. [bloom3d]: https://bloom3d.com @@ -516,13 +516,13 @@ The goals of Noumenal are: - Enjoyable to use on a mobile device - Accessible to as many people as possible -- Real time solid modeling with boolean operations +- Real-time solid modeling with boolean operations - Non-destructive editing and robustness to prevent data loss - Intuitive manipulation by projecting from the screen glass into 3D space - Export to the most widely used formats, such as glTF, USDZ, and STL for 3D printing -These goals have lead to an unique interface. +These goals have led to a unique interface. [noumenal-website]: https://noumenal.app [noumenal-discord]: https://discord.gg/PFeZQE48gG @@ -622,7 +622,7 @@ render graph structure. Earlier this year [Screen 13] was updated with a dynamic graph pattern, but there was no good starter documentation and a few bugs. There is a [getting started][s13-getting-started] -guide now! Also, a ton of new features that have been added in the last month: +guide now! Also, a ton of new features have been added in the last month: - ImGui support - Mac support