Update landing page more

Author: ericholscher

readthedocs/templates/homepage.html

@@ -55,21 +55,22 @@ <h2>{% trans "Technical documentation lives here" %}</h2>
 
   <section>
     <div class="feature">
-      <h3>Free docs hosting</h3>
+      <h3>Free docs hosting for open source</h3>
       <p>
         {% blocktrans trimmed %}
-        We will host your documentation for free forever.
-        There are no tricks. We help tens of thousands of open source projects
-        share their docs.
+        We will host your documentation for free, forever.
+        There are no tricks.
+        We help over 100,000 open source projects share their docs,
+        including a custom domain and theme.
         {% endblocktrans %}
       </p>
     </div>
     <div class="feature">
-      <h3>Webhooks</h3>
+      <h3>Always up to date</h3>
       <p>
         {% blocktrans trimmed %}
-        Whenever you push code to your favorite version control system,
-        whether that is Git, Mercurial, Bazaar, or Subversion, we will
+        Whenever you push code to your favorite version control service,
+        whether that is GitHub, BitBucket, or GitLab, we will
         automatically build your docs so your code and documentation are
         never out of sync.
         {% endblocktrans %}
@@ -80,10 +81,10 @@ <h3>Webhooks</h3>
 
   <section>
     <div class="feature">
-      <h3>Multiple formats</h3>
+      <h3>Downloadable formats</h3>
       <p>
         {% blocktrans trimmed %}
-        Of course we build and host your docs for the web, but they are
+        We build and host your docs for the web, but they are
         also vieweable as PDFs, as single page HTML, and for eReaders.
         No additional configuration is required.
         {% endblocktrans %}