Merge pull request #471 from arduino/martab1994-patch-5

Update breakout-jlink-setup.md

Author: martab1994

content/hardware/04.pro/carriers/portenta-breakout/tutorials/breakout-jlink-setup/breakout-jlink-setup.md

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ This tutorial will show you how to debug an Arduino sketch using the Portenta H7
 ## Instructions
 ### 1. Setting up with the Arduino IDE
 
-First, if you haven't already, install the [Arduino IDE](https://www.arduino.cc/en/software) and connect your Portenta H7. When uploading a sketch to your Arduino board with the Arduino IDE, it will build an .ELF file of the sketch. We will need this file to debug in Ozone in the next step. To easily find the file path to the .ELF file, we can enable the show verbose output option in the Arduino IDE. To do this, open up the preferences under **File > Preferences** in the Arduino IDE.
+First, if you haven't done it yet, install the [Arduino IDE](https://www.arduino.cc/en/software) and connect your Portenta H7. When uploading a sketch to your Arduino board with the Arduino IDE, it will build an .ELF file of the sketch. We will need this file to debug in Ozone in the next steps. To easily find the file path of the .ELF file, we can enable the show verbose output option in the Arduino IDE. To do this, open up the preferences under **File > Preferences** in the Arduino IDE.
 
 ![Preferences in Arduino IDE](assets/breakout_jlink_ard_ide_pref.png)
 
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ When you have the preferences window open, look for the **Show verbose output du
 
 Now we are ready to upload the script that we want to debug. If you don't have a sketch to test, you can use the example sketch found in the **Conclusion** section of this tutorial.
 
-When we upload the sketch with the Arduino IDE, we need to know where the .ELF file will be saved. Build your project in the Arduino IDE, and highlight the output directory, it could look for example like `C:\Users\profile\AppData\Local\Temp\arduino_build_815037`. Note down the path for easier access in the next step.
+When we upload the sketch with the Arduino IDE, we need to know where the .ELF file will be saved. Build your project in the Arduino IDE and highlight the output directory; it should look for example like `C:\Users\profile\AppData\Local\Temp\arduino_build_815037`. Note down the path for easier access in the next step.
 
 ![The .elf file path in Arduino IDE](assets/breakout_jlink_elf_path.png)
 
@@ -49,41 +49,41 @@ First, connect the Portenta H7 to the Breakout. To begin using the J-link device
 
 ### 3. Using the Setup with Segger Ozone
 
-Download and install [Segger's Ozone debugger](https://www.segger.com/downloads/J-link/#Ozone). If you are on windows, make sure to also download the [J-Link Software and Documentation Pack for Windows.](https://www.segger.com/products/debug-probes/j-link/tools/j-link-gdb-server/about-j-link-gdb-server/) 
+Download and install [Segger's Ozone debugger](https://www.segger.com/downloads/J-link/#Ozone). If you are on Windows, make sure to also download the [J-Link Software and Documentation Pack for Windows.](https://www.segger.com/products/debug-probes/j-link/tools/j-link-gdb-server/about-j-link-gdb-server/) 
 
- When starting Ozone, make sure to enter the correct CPU into the settings box. The Portenta H7 uses the **STM32H747XI**, you can then chose between the M4 and M7 core on the Portenta. 
+ When starting Ozone, make sure to enter the correct CPU into the settings box. The Portenta H7 uses the **STM32H747XI**; you can then choose between the M4 and M7 core on the Portenta. 
 
 ![Segger Ozone J-Link cpu settings](assets/breakout_jlink_ozone_cpu.png)
 
-Continue to the next step. Here we need to change the **Target Interface** to **SWD**. The Portenta H7 does not support JTAG. Then select your J-link device in the list of emulators and head to the next page.
+Continue to the next step. Here you need to change the **Target Interface** to **SWD**. The Portenta H7 does not support JTAG. Then select your J-link device in the list of emulators and head to the next page.
 
 ![Segger Ozone J-Link connection settings](assets/breakout_jlink_connection_setting.png)
 
-Now you get to the window that asks you to select the program to be debugged, this is where you load the project's .ELF file. With the temporary output path that we noted before. Navigate to the correct directory, and select the .ELF file.
+Now you get to the window that asks you to select the program to be debugged, this is where you load the project's .ELF file with the temporary output path that we noted before. Navigate to the correct directory, and select the .ELF file.
 
 ![Temporary .ELF file location](assets/breakout_jlink_ozone_elf_file.png)
 
-In the 'optional settings' dialog, set both options 'Initial PC' and 'Initial Stack Pointer' to 'Do not set' as it would skip the Arduino bootloader otherwise which may prevent the sketch from running correctly.
+In the 'optional settings' dialog, set both options 'Initial PC' and 'Initial Stack Pointer' to 'Do not set' as it would skip the Arduino bootloader, otherwise this may prevent the sketch from running correctly.
 
 ![Segger Ozone J-Link connection optional settings](assets/breakout_jlink_optional_settings.png)
 
-When the setup is finished Ozone will open the file containing the main function. You will note that this is not the .ino sketch you wrote since this is an abstraction layer generated by the IDE. To open our .ino sketch we need to go to **Find > Find source file** in the top toolbar.
+When the setup is finished, Ozone will open the file containing the main function. You will note that this is not the .ino sketch you wrote since this is an abstraction layer generated by the IDE. To open our .ino sketch we need to go to **Find > Find source file** in the top toolbar.
 
 ![Find source file in Ozone](assets/breakout_jlink_ozone_find_tab.png)
 
-In the little window that appears, type ".ino". You should now be able to see the file, select the file and it will open it in Ozone.
+In the little window that appears, type ".ino". You should now be able to see the file, select the file and open it in Ozone.
 
 ![Find source file window](assets/breakout_jlink_ozone_find_window.png)
 
-Now you are ready to start debugging. Simply go to **Debug > Download & Reset Program** to start debugging your sketch, you can add breakpoints , inspect variables, halt the execution and more.
+Now you are ready to start debugging. Simply go to **Debug > Download & Reset Program** to start debugging your sketch: you can add breakpoints , inspect variables, halt the execution and more.
 
 ![Start debugging in Ozone](assets/breakout_jlink_ozone_start_debugging.png)
 
 For more information about the features present in the Ozone debugger, please go [here.](https://www.segger.com/products/development-tools/ozone-j-link-debugger/technology/application-debugging/)
 
 ## Conclusion
 
-In this tutorial, you learned how to connect your Portenta H7 and Breakout board to a J-link device and use it with the Ozone debugger. We also went through how to create a file with Arduino IDE that can be debugged in Ozone. And finally how to use the Ozone debugger to debug an Arduino sketch.
+In this tutorial, you learned how to connect your Portenta H7 and Breakout board to a J-link device and use it with the Ozone debugger. We also went through how to create a file with Arduino IDE that can be debugged in Ozone. And eventually how to use the Ozone debugger to debug an Arduino sketch.
 
 ### Example Sketch