docs(displaying-data/ts): proofread

chalin · chalin · commit d653f20b1512 · 2016-07-03T14:02:53.000-07:00
- TS prose updated to include @kwalrath's revisions from a while ago, with some of my edits as well. - E2e suites passed: public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/dart public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts
diff --git a/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/app/app-ctor.component.ts b/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/app/app-ctor.component.ts
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ import { Component } from '@angular/core';
     <h2>My favorite hero is: {{myHero}}</h2>
     `
 })
-// #docregion app-ctor
+// #docregion class
 export class AppCtorComponent {
   title: string;
   myHero: string;
@@ -17,4 +17,3 @@ export class AppCtorComponent {
     this.myHero = 'Windstorm';
   }
 }
-// #enddocregion app-ctor
diff --git a/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/app/app.component.2.ts b/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/app/app.component.2.ts
@@ -9,20 +9,18 @@ import { Component } from '@angular/core';
     <h2>My favorite hero is: {{myHero}}</h2>
     <p>Heroes:</p>
     <ul>
-  // #docregion li-repeater
+  // #docregion li
       <li *ngFor="let hero of heroes">
         {{ hero }}
       </li>
-  // #enddocregion li-repeater
+  // #enddocregion li
     </ul>
   `
   // #enddocregion template
 })
-// #docregion mock-heroes
+// #docregion class
 export class AppComponent {
   title = 'Tour of Heroes';
   heroes = ['Windstorm', 'Bombasto', 'Magneta', 'Tornado'];
   myHero = this.heroes[0];
 }
-// #enddocregion mock-heroes
-// #enddocregion
diff --git a/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/app/app.component.3.ts b/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/app/app.component.3.ts
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 // #docregion
 import { Component } from '@angular/core';
-// #docregion import-hero
+// #docregion import
 import { Hero } from './hero';
-// #enddocregion import-hero
+// #enddocregion import
 
 @Component({
   selector: 'my-app',
@@ -32,5 +32,3 @@ export class AppComponent {
   myHero = this.heroes[0];
   // #enddocregion heroes
 }
-// #enddocregion class
-// #enddocregion
diff --git a/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/app/app.component.ts b/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/app/app.component.ts
@@ -1,8 +1,6 @@
 // #docplaster
 // #docregion final
-// #docregion imports
 import { Component } from '@angular/core';
-// #enddocregion imports
 import { Hero } from './hero';
 
 @Component({
@@ -17,12 +15,10 @@ import { Hero } from './hero';
       </li>
   </ul>
   // #docregion message
-  <p *ngIf="heroes.length
- > 3">There are many heroes!</p>
+  <p *ngIf="heroes.length > 3">There are many heroes!</p>
   // #enddocregion message
 `
 })
-
 export class AppComponent {
   title = 'Tour of Heroes';
   heroes = [
diff --git a/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/app/hero.ts b/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/app/hero.ts
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 // #docregion
 export class Hero {
   constructor(
-    // #docregion id-parameter
+    // #docregion id
     public id: number,
-    // #enddocregion id-parameter
+    // #enddocregion id
     public name: string) { }
 }
 // #enddocregion
diff --git a/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/index.html b/public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts/index.html
@@ -19,10 +19,10 @@
     </script>
   </head>
 
-  <!-- #docregion my-app -->
+  <!-- #docregion body -->
   <body>
     <my-app>loading...</my-app>
   </body>
-  <!-- #enddocregion my-app -->
+  <!-- #enddocregion body -->
 
 </html>
diff --git a/public/docs/ts/latest/guide/displaying-data.jade b/public/docs/ts/latest/guide/displaying-data.jade

Original file line number	Diff line number	Diff line change
`@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ import { Component } from '@angular/core';`
`7`	`7`	`<h2>My favorite hero is: {{myHero}}</h2>`
`8`	`8`	`
`9`	`9`	`})`
`10`		`-// #docregion app-ctor`
	`10`	`+// #docregion class`
`11`	`11`	`export class AppCtorComponent {`
`12`	`12`	`title: string;`
`13`	`13`	`myHero: string;`
`@@ -17,4 +17,3 @@ export class AppCtorComponent {`
`17`	`17`	`this.myHero = 'Windstorm';`
`18`	`18`	`}`
`19`	`19`	`}`
`20`		`-// #enddocregion app-ctor`